tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post4773039655490660712..comments2021-01-21T08:29:58.836+01:00Comments on 8th Science 2010: Astronomyms.dhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00064622276445020773noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-7628326346926746012010-05-14T12:03:33.615+02:002010-05-14T12:03:33.615+02:00Ines - nice use of different colors to separate di...Ines - nice use of different colors to separate different topics we discussed in class. You have hyperlinked well for the Earth Day information, but the Planet Extra Credit Maps could have been hyperlinked as well. Good Earth Day picture, but more pictures could have been included for the other parts of the discussion today. Your spelling, grammar and sentence structure are smooth and clear. Be careful with your posting about Exosolar Planets - there is some weird formatting in the text. Make sure to preview before posting your final version. Overall, good job on your scribe post :) Ms. D.ms.dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00064622276445020773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-56356395154232166622010-04-26T17:57:45.622+02:002010-04-26T17:57:45.622+02:00Awesome job Inez.
The appearance of your blog is q...Awesome job Inez.<br />The appearance of your blog is quite staggering as you have supported it with both catchy pictures and insightful web pages such as the literate Wombat. It was also helpful, as you went into detail with your paragraphs and what we had specifically gone though in class that very day.<br />The colors brought up in your post were organized and neat, and I give you much praise for adding dates. Like Aidan said, however, the gentleman will not be coming in on Tuesday, May 4th as the Croatian classes will be having their field trip. All in all, I commend you on a job well done!Emmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15320039545484490836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-25053905527909283642010-04-23T09:49:33.052+02:002010-04-23T09:49:33.052+02:00Great scribe post! I liked the fact that you wrote...Great scribe post! I liked the fact that you wrote about Earth Day, gave links, and mentioned homework asssignments.I also think it was great that everything was so neat and nicely classified. Sometimes the writing was a bit bright and hard to read, but other then that super post! - FabiFabihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16952450233461726792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-36508519374017989202010-04-23T07:18:41.248+02:002010-04-23T07:18:41.248+02:00Dear Ines :)
This Scribe Post shows me that you h...Dear Ines :)<br /><br />This Scribe Post shows me that you have really put effort into this. It is the most organized post I've seen so far for Grade 8! The point that proves my opinion is the whole simplicity of your post. It is so simple with a few things that make it kind of a smarty simple :) Just using a few colors for the interface made your post look very colorful and interesting. So, good job on the simpe part for it. Another fact, your English is always perfect :) Personally, I haven't found any mistakes. Although, the Earth in a shape of heart is very lovely, I would have included a few more pictures. The "helping" side of your post is very good too. You have included links to some videos on Youtube, and the most important, made a very colorful and easy understaning list of the upcoming events, which makes it kind of easier for the reader. In total, I can say that this is well organized post and is very colorful, which makes the readers want to read it even more! Keep it up :)<br /><br />SeverynSeverynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09569160022239566049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-29425884782761580592010-04-22T22:15:12.639+02:002010-04-22T22:15:12.639+02:00Great job on your post! Thanks a bunch for being v...Great job on your post! Thanks a bunch for being very precise about our homework. I also like the choice of the colors you used for the post. It is cool that you posted the links, they were awesome! But my suggestion is to post a little bit more pictures to your post to get the idea of the topic you are discussing about. But overall, your post was great! Keep it up!germanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00081634502436024928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-25885307533465982332010-04-22T20:41:07.060+02:002010-04-22T20:41:07.060+02:00Quite a commendable post, Ines. Your portrayal of ...Quite a commendable post, Ines. Your portrayal of the Earth in the first photograph is classy, and I admire your incorporation of different pigmentation in your text. The due dates were indeed efficacious as was the links to the wombat and Sun chips. My only negative appraisal is the lack of pictures, which ceased to make it as riveting as it could have been. All in all, a swell job.Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01365638194011764090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-61815580630238609872010-04-22T20:19:08.969+02:002010-04-22T20:19:08.969+02:00Nice one, Inez. I love the effort you put into pos...Nice one, Inez. I love the effort you put into posts that I would never have near the patience or, more importantly, attention span to do. Colors are nice and keep it organized, and thanks for the Links as well. The wombat is awesome :). Anyway, your post is overall very awesome but you have some very minor errors in your post. First, it is worth 3 points each for a grand total of 12 points if you do all four planets in extra credit. And Ms. D said that the man cannot come on the 4th of May due to our field trip. <br /><br />Thanks.Aidanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263386691296788230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-91740867295087356082010-04-22T20:03:02.681+02:002010-04-22T20:03:02.681+02:00I really liked this post! I liked the use of diffe...I really liked this post! I liked the use of different colors and I really liked the links. You told the history of Earth Day, which was really cool! I think that you could've made the "next scribe" part a bit bigger and in a different color. <br />Great job Ines!<br />P.S. I really like the Hebrew part!Viktorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10513360904760260444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-48156510279485310812010-04-22T19:55:23.921+02:002010-04-22T19:55:23.921+02:00Great post. :) You used appropriate colors, and ma...Great post. :) You used appropriate colors, and managed to note and remind topics we discussed and all the assignments given out recently. You included lots of information and kept the scribe post easy to read and bright, but I would recommend to add some pictures. An example, you could include a picture of Exosolar planets.alexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02066256644588573366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-47014359545796614252010-04-22T19:05:30.916+02:002010-04-22T19:05:30.916+02:00Good job ines!. You were very percise on the homew...Good job ines!. You were very percise on the homework you also mentioned the upcoming things. You had a amazing 1st picture and the links are very helpfull. The text is very easy to read and it is very in depth. i also belive you took alot of notes because i doubt any normal human could take so much information in and remember it :) Good job!Jacobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02118984104547474017noreply@blogger.com