tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post5055249356096078090..comments2021-01-21T08:29:58.836+01:00Comments on 8th Science 2010: Astronomy Q & Ams.dhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00064622276445020773noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-72680065119647806682010-05-31T20:54:16.893+02:002010-05-31T20:54:16.893+02:00Hi Luke I like your use of colors and your font i...Hi Luke I like your use of colors and your font is a reasonable size. Your grammar is quite good. I think that you made your post simple and understandable. I like how you went in to depth about what you learned that day. It was really cool to read about the Roman and Greek God connections. I like that you put pictures. One really little suggestion t is to maybe look over it before posting it. All in all great job! (:Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09619179108338826958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-28902911448243656192010-04-28T15:58:58.493+02:002010-04-28T15:58:58.493+02:00Thanks for adding the labels Luke. Your spelling, ...Thanks for adding the labels Luke. Your spelling, grammar and sentence structure all look good. However, you have not really gone far enough with your scientific explanation. Plus you could have included more pictures and made your links hyper-linked so people can go to them easily. Nice use of color. This quarter the newest requirement was to relate what we covered to real-life. Please pay closer attention to directions the first time around. Overall, not bad :)ms.dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00064622276445020773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-51216616338824572342010-04-22T16:11:52.324+02:002010-04-22T16:11:52.324+02:00Hi there Luke - One important thing - you have for...Hi there Luke - One important thing - you have forgotten to add your labels at the bottom of your post and I will not grade it until you have done this. Make sure to follow all directions. Talk with me if you have questions.ms.dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00064622276445020773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-41125170371161374232010-04-16T08:01:35.527+02:002010-04-16T08:01:35.527+02:00This is a very good scribe post and sums up one of...This is a very good scribe post and sums up one of the last classes very well! Anyone who was sick would have easily known what happened in class just by reading the scribe post. One suggestion would be to make the yellow a little lighter because it is a little strenuous to read but all in all this is a great post and well done!<br /><br />- Minor postIneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13409221036186781724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-35456809403206530632010-04-16T07:52:24.100+02:002010-04-16T07:52:24.100+02:00I think you did a good job. Everything is very org...I think you did a good job. Everything is very organized and is easy to read and understand.I like how you included facts about each planet that Inez and Alex persented.<br />Well done!<br />(:<br />-HollyHollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14627544451776590020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-23419541816800379992010-04-15T21:03:40.396+02:002010-04-15T21:03:40.396+02:00I thought you made your post very easy to read, si...I thought you made your post very easy to read, simple, and it's great that you repeated assignments that are due soon. You used color well and have nice pictures. I would just suggest to include links. For example, a link to a page that explains more about these two celestial bodies for anyone who wants to learn more about them.<br />-Alexalexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02066256644588573366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-25357241090876502010-04-15T20:44:15.077+02:002010-04-15T20:44:15.077+02:00Good job Luke.
Your post included the more interes...Good job Luke.<br />Your post included the more interesting facts about planets and was thus easy to read. Additionally, you explained the Roman & Greek God connections which was quite cool to read about. Lastly, you explained how blogging was going to be different this quarter, which I thought was helpful.<br />-HanaHannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01365638194011764090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-51806728425217033162010-04-15T20:28:13.756+02:002010-04-15T20:28:13.756+02:00Good job Luke, you did a very good job explaining ...Good job Luke, you did a very good job explaining what was done in class and the links to greek mythology were interesting. You made a minor grammar mistake its 7th not 7nth.Murttaghhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01438515783807272944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6174598148916406027.post-50889385026128718462010-04-15T17:55:09.947+02:002010-04-15T17:55:09.947+02:00Thanks Luke. You said a lot about astronomy and ho...Thanks Luke. You said a lot about astronomy and how we talked in class you were very specific and this helped me. You named the moons and satelites. And you went in depth with the greek Gods and Roman God the black hole part was also very interesting :) fantastic job !Jacobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02118984104547474017noreply@blogger.com